My priorities first.

August 22nd, 2012, 1:44 am

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True_Darius, August 22nd, 2012, 1:47 am


In a pair of weeks i will upload the ad of the new Fanart/fanfic/special contest... Until then... enjoy the show!

-This strip has even more broken english than usual. Im open to corrections, but please, only natives. :P

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Guest, August 22nd, 2012, 2:35 am


maybe due to the broken englisch (but im not a native speaker either),... but I just dont get the joke. I really hope, the whole DE-Stuff will finish soon.

Romanceblitz (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 2:38 am


Lol nice strip ^_^ as for the corrections the only thing I can think of is

"Get back!, Don't come any closer!"

Other then that maybe "Not even a step, monkey, or you will have to pick up the head of your precious fateseer from the floor."

IG88 (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 2:39 am


Now did she kill that big kroott?
If so, Sha'shiva will kill her. And Korla will help.

Sorry, no native, but I would write 'GET BACK' instead of 'GO BACK'. And 'whitout' instead of 'with no'.

Why is the DL falling down in the last Panel? Did she or the sargent hit him? Or is he just face-grounding(abrevation of facepalm)?

True_Darius, August 22nd, 2012, 2:52 am


Better now? ;)

Commander McBragg (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 3:31 am


"Why is DL falling down in the last panel?" Maybe got that hypo of fun stuff in the...aaaaa....somewhere?

Norbert (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 5:19 am


Someone apperently never watched Dragonball...
In some (or probably many) of the anime intended for a younger audience, everyone falling down (or rather being down from one moment to the next, without any actual falling being visible) seems to be the equivalent to a facepalm.

True_Darius, August 22nd, 2012, 5:29 am


I think im getting too old for writting scripts :P

Alphz (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 6:00 am


Hehe.

For those that are confused about the last pane; its basically a face palm. The character is shown to fall suddenly from shock / surprise to something outrageous.

As for a correction: "You can beat him with no problem" would commonly be said as "You can beat him no problem". Maybe a comma after 'him' if you want to emphasise a pause.

Henry91, August 22nd, 2012, 7:02 am

@True_Darius Nuh uh, they still good.
Wait.. She's a Dark Eldar, don't they draw sustenance from pain as well?
Is she saying she wants to literally grab someone/thing to nom, or does she want to torture something/one?

Guest, August 22nd, 2012, 8:08 am


@Henry91 Me thinks she just wants a milkshake or a happy meal.

Guest, August 22nd, 2012, 8:21 am


oh i thought she used the venom thing on him.

(dont know why but)

Rude (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 8:42 am


I get that feeling that she injeckted kroot with painkiller or sleeping drug.

aslo Very good strip :3

Render (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 11:39 am

It's not his fault...
If he was to face palm, he would be sticking his sword into his face. Considering the options, falling still conveys the message and doesn't result in his suicide.

Try0again0bragg (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 1:21 pm

Quick note
Awesome strip! Made me laugh.

Quick note about the last panel. The phrase would usually be along the lines of "Shall we go get something to eat?" Alternatively you could try "Shall we get some food?" or "Shall we find something to eat?"

True_Darius, August 22nd, 2012, 5:58 pm


Fix`d

Commander McBragg (Guest), August 22nd, 2012, 11:14 pm


"@Henry91 Me thinks she just wants a milkshake or a happy meal."
The idea of what a Dark Eldar milkshake, much less a Happy Meal is scares the crap out of me!

Norbert (Guest), August 23rd, 2012, 3:22 am


From what I gathered about Dark Eldar fluff, they don't draw sustanance any sustanance from pain and/or souls.
Slaanesh is constantly sucking their souls out bit by bit, so they consume other souls to make sure that the little bits that Slaanesh gets, are bits that actually belonged to someone else.
Or put otherwise, the consumed souls act as a shield, so the DE soul is kept save.
Pain and suffering just make the souls they consume "tastier" and/or easier to rip out of the victims body.

Straken's Poker Pal (Guest), August 23rd, 2012, 6:45 am


Hot Damn! I knew it!

Looks like the Succubus is joining the party.


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