I understand plenty well
the child just activated a message broad casting system in the helmet I cant confrem but it is probably a vid/audio tansmition that's "classified" therefor most likely picked up by any dark eldar receiver that it passes (there is a reason that important messages are cared by people in Commorragh) unless these guys are have gotten really sloppy they will go oooh important message and hack it.
Dark in any case
Well, either it will be picked up by Dark Eldar transmitters, or the Dark Angels would want to have a talk with their lost brother. And we know how Dark Angels treat their lost brothers, now, don't we.
um, that thing sending data to dark angels makes no sense. It's a Ttauminator helm, not loyalist. If anything it sent a message back to Ttau space; though doing it via Imperial tech (salvaged or captured notwithstanding) doesn't make it safer
Why would the Ordo Malleus and Grey Knights be involved?
The Malleus' department is Chaos infestation with the Grey Knights being their elite anti-deamon troops.
If the Inquisition would come after Johnsen, it'd be the Ordo Hereticus (due to him being classified as a heretic) or the Ordo Xenos (because he's living with and working for aliens).
Though I doubt either will happen, since the Adeptus Astartes are one of the few organisations that are outside of inquisitorial juristiction (the others would be the Adeptus Mechanicus and partially the Navis Nobilitae).
Space Marines usually take care of their own business, especially the Dark Angels.
Checked out and liked your comic.
It's pretty fun, but so far it seems very average and somewhat cliché, but that may just be because the core concept has been done very often which makes it very difficult to stand out.
I also wonder, do you browse the Tvtropes website?
If not, you would probably benefit from taking a peek at some of the pages (not that this one isn't awesome already), especially the Deconstruction, Reconstruction, Lampshade Hanging and Reality Ensues tropes as you seem fond of using them.
Everything leads to the TvTropes page!
And I mean correcting small stuff like spelling errors, or a bandage moving from arm to arm (Don't remember exactly, but it was something like that a small while ago.).
You wouldn't believe how many authors simply never correct stuff like that, and occasionally even try to justify them in a really roundabout way that just makes an even bigger plot hole than a tiny continuity error or misspelling might have and thought you might want to know that we (well, I, but I doubt I'm alone) appreciate how you're willing to refine your work even after it has been posted.