Tested(II)

October 2nd, 2013, 3:10 am

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True_Darius, October 2nd, 2013, 3:10 am


Hello? Anybody there?!

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Evan Smith (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 3:59 am

Knock knock... who's there?
Hmm...what could be behind door number 1?

Just have to say Darius, love the comic. I got into it a couple of months ago and very impressed. Keep up the good work!

Christopher (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 4:18 am

Typo?
I think there is a typo in the first bubble, but it could be his way of speaking:
"[...]will extend these halls?"
more logical would be
"[...]will these halls extend?"

True_Darius, October 2nd, 2013, 4:34 am


Fixed. Thanks.

Kevin (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 4:50 am

grammar
"can it be that a way out?" is odd, I would recommended "could that be the way out?" or "could that be a way out?" or "can it be, a way out?". personally I would chose one of the first two.

I might also use "I've" instead of "I have". alternatively "I've been down hear for hours!" might work.

Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this comic.
-Kevin

True_Darius, October 2nd, 2013, 5:24 am


Fix`d too. Thanks.

Gonfrask (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 7:05 am


Buena manera de dar sensacion de paso de tiempo con eso de que han pasado horas, que seas un vago y no quieras dibujar pasillos y pasillos se entiende XDDD

The Suspicous One (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 9:43 am


He will become an aspect warrior....'nuff said....

Commander MacBragg (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 12:54 pm

"Who iz it?"
Why do you think I have this out-rrrageous accent, you silly Space Marine?!

If they reply in a French accent, RUN! or it could be worse...

Space Marines of Camelot: [singing] We're Space Marines of the Round Table, we dance whene'er we're able. We do routines and chorus scenes with footwork impec-cable, We dine well here in Camelot, we eat ham and jam and Spam a lot. / We're Space Marines of the Round Table, our shows are for-mi-dable. But many times we're given rhymes that are quite un-sing-able, We're opera mad in Camelot, we sing from the diaphragm a lot. / In war we're tough and able, Quite in-de-fa-ti-gable. Between our quests we sequin vests and impersonate Clark Gable / It's a busy life in Camelot

The Laughing God (Guest), October 3rd, 2013, 6:34 am


If Johnson becomes an aspect warrior Khaine himself will not be enough to bring him down...

Ghost (Guest), October 5th, 2013, 10:37 pm

Follow the yellow brick road...
Well...I was told to follow the yellow brick road, go past the never ending hallway of doom, and take a right at the large room of really bright light... What do I find? ....EL DORADO IS NOTHING BUT A GIANT ROCK! Oh, wait...there's a door...


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