October 2nd, 2013, 3:10 am

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True_Darius, October 2nd, 2013, 3:10 am

Hello? Anybody there?!

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Evan Smith (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 3:59 am

Knock knock... who's there?
Hmm...what could be behind door number 1?

Just have to say Darius, love the comic. I got into it a couple of months ago and very impressed. Keep up the good work!

Christopher (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 4:18 am

I think there is a typo in the first bubble, but it could be his way of speaking:
"[...]will extend these halls?"
more logical would be
"[...]will these halls extend?"

True_Darius, October 2nd, 2013, 4:34 am

Fixed. Thanks.

Kevin (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 4:50 am

"can it be that a way out?" is odd, I would recommended "could that be the way out?" or "could that be a way out?" or "can it be, a way out?". personally I would chose one of the first two.

I might also use "I've" instead of "I have". alternatively "I've been down hear for hours!" might work.

Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this comic.

True_Darius, October 2nd, 2013, 5:24 am

Fix`d too. Thanks.

Gonfrask (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 7:05 am

Buena manera de dar sensacion de paso de tiempo con eso de que han pasado horas, que seas un vago y no quieras dibujar pasillos y pasillos se entiende XDDD

The Suspicous One (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 9:43 am

He will become an aspect warrior....'nuff said....

Commander MacBragg (Guest), October 2nd, 2013, 12:54 pm

"Who iz it?"
Why do you think I have this out-rrrageous accent, you silly Space Marine?!

If they reply in a French accent, RUN! or it could be worse...

Space Marines of Camelot: [singing] We're Space Marines of the Round Table, we dance whene'er we're able. We do routines and chorus scenes with footwork impec-cable, We dine well here in Camelot, we eat ham and jam and Spam a lot. / We're Space Marines of the Round Table, our shows are for-mi-dable. But many times we're given rhymes that are quite un-sing-able, We're opera mad in Camelot, we sing from the diaphragm a lot. / In war we're tough and able, Quite in-de-fa-ti-gable. Between our quests we sequin vests and impersonate Clark Gable / It's a busy life in Camelot

The Laughing God (Guest), October 3rd, 2013, 6:34 am

If Johnson becomes an aspect warrior Khaine himself will not be enough to bring him down...

Ghost (Guest), October 5th, 2013, 10:37 pm

Follow the yellow brick road...
Well...I was told to follow the yellow brick road, go past the never ending hallway of doom, and take a right at the large room of really bright light... What do I find? ....EL DORADO IS NOTHING BUT A GIANT ROCK! Oh, wait...there's a door...